Readers/Writers: Do you think this part of my story is funny?

okay. i know you werent trying to offend polish people and all but your character SHOULDNT think like that. because one of my best friends was born in poland. and she is one of the most beautiful poeple i have ever met. two of my boyfriends have dumped me to try and go out with her (but of course she didnt!) and her WHOLE ENTIRE FAMILY is like model worthy. like she doesnt even have to wear makeup and she is prettier than all the other beautiful people in the world. sometimes this makes you hate her, but then she is really nice and has her little polish accent and crap and im just going on and on cuz i get very defensive of my family and friends...SORRY! but it was pretty funny :)